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Comment on A random chapter - maybe put it in after the chapter when the big heavy cages are being installed in the lab by Administrator

Administrator — Mon, 29 Sep 2008 07:20:22 +0000

Hey - it’s early. I’m supposed to be adding Chapters October 1. Holy smokes - Oct 1? What have I been doing all weekend? I should have been writing, instead I was sleeping.

Anyway, I’m getting a system down: 1) write the chapter in word 2) put the filename and location at the top of the page 3) print it out 4) mail it to myself as a backup 5) post it here.

A bit of coolness: If I can’t quite write the chapter, I can at least paint the scene and write down the perspectives of the characters. Like I did here. I can rewrite later.

Go Ensure! Srsly, what’s up with all the Ensure ads?

Comment on Tuesday - September 15, 2008 by Administrator

Administrator — Wed, 17 Sep 2008 00:40:45 +0000

I don’t ever know where that “Ensure” thing came from. Sorry about that.

Comment on Chapter 16 by Jason

Jason — Wed, 27 Aug 2008 00:18:27 +0000

Your writing has a cinematic quality to it. I can definitely see this becoming a feature length movie.

Thoroughly enjoyable Moonsong

Comment on Chapter 15 by Administrator

Administrator — Tue, 12 Aug 2008 04:37:50 +0000

Uuuuuuuuuuuuhhhhhhhhh…..At least I’m writing something.

Comment on Chapter 14 by Administrator

Administrator — Mon, 04 Aug 2008 03:32:16 +0000

“Where did i come from” — i need to change that. that book came out in 2000. I am thinking of a book from the 1970’s - it had a similar title.

i should put in an earlier flashback where there is a joking conversation about chapman spending so much time in the bathroom, and about his questions about sex. he’s young, at 7, but the speakers will say he’s precocious because of ‘what he is.’ then they’ll get that book for him.

i also want to change the structure so that chapman is doing something, faber is doing something. more connectedness between what’s going on. an example - that michael prescott book where the security agent girl is protecting the news anchor lady from the psycho.